Tuesday 19 January 2010

Second Draft

Feedback:
  • Line up text
  • The background needs to be more brighter

Wednesday 6 January 2010

First DRAFT

Front cover


Feedback:
  • change the positioning of the bar code
  • the model's eyes are too unrealistic
  • th font doesn't compliment each other
  • the selling line isn't flowing
  • line up text
  • background is dark


Image